after you,who will swim in my tears..

Discussion dans 'Vos poésies' créé par soliloque, 10 Août 2006.

  1. soliloque

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    I still remember her way of kissing my finger
    I still remember her way of turning and dancing
    In her small world,
    Like a queen in a kingdom, she was blessed.
    She was my lovely red fish.
    I still remember my moments of sadness,
    And how she was there for me, to comfort me, to help me
    And maybe to fade my pains…to take care of me!
    She was in my world
    I tried to be in hers, to feel her
    She was swimming in a small fish ball,
    I always felt that she swims in my tears,
    And the fish swim in the lake!
    I couldn’t realize how can that heart her
    How can that change her life!
    She was swimming breathing in my pains
    I tried many time to find a soul-mate for her,
    I don’t want her to die, without finding someone to cry…
    She was me, I was my small red fish
    I was feeling her loneliness!
    She was feeling mine!


    My fish died before enjoying swimming in the lake,
    And before that I find a soul-mate.
    Someone broke her world!
    She died lonely, blame…
    And not in a heroic way!
    I was there for her, I cried for her
    I cried her life, I cried my life…
    She was me, I was my lonely red fish
    I don’t want to die like she died.
     
  2. jniyen

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    Re : after you,who will swim in my tears..

    wa jmiiiil hadchi [17h]
    wa7ed lmocharaka basiii6a b un truc kont ktebto ch7aaal hadi

    drink my tears
    one by one
    'cause each one hold my soul
    écause each one hide my love
    how would you know that the bird is sad?
    how would you know he really cries

    the song of songs
    has began
    i am
    loving
    a girl​
     
  3. milagro

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    so sweet !!
    j'aime bien le style !!
    jniyen ton poéme m'a vraiment touché un vrai coup de maitre!!
     
  4. soliloque

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    ssi jniyen ser9ti lia l2adwa2 , 7ram 3lik a 5oya :-(
    enfin pr etre sincere , ton poème wa3er bjehd, c'est cek'on peut appeler de la poesie..un vrai coup de maite ki magalt mily [06c]
     
  5. milagro

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    alors chère touriste, tu comptes toujours pas nous faire part de tes oeuvres ? [17h]
     

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