Masterpiece

Discussion dans 'Vos poésies' créé par fadwa, 22 Septembre 2005.

  1. fadwa

    fadwa Visiteur

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    Regret flows from the depths of my soul
    With the strength of a flood
    I have held these gates shut for too long
    And though tormenting, they should not be stopped.

    The thought of your anguish
    Even as I write to you now
    Stops my heart cold
    As well it should

    What I see in front of me
    Is a painting of my love
    Its most thoughtful brushstrokes
    Mottled by hurried abstraction and inattention

    A person who had not seen this masterpiece created
    Might think it to be refuse and pass it by unknowingly
    Letting be obscured the deep beauty of its many scenes
    By layers of the tarnish of mistreatment...........
    You are a masterpiece..
     
  2. zen

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    Re : Masterpiece

    nice nice fdiwdiw you're the best, keep up!
     
  3. Stutu

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    [07h] fdawdaw= hadshi zdawdaw ...ur ze best
     

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