when we think too much

Discussion dans 'Vos poésies' créé par jniyen, 9 Janvier 2005.

  1. jniyen

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    i feel myself ascending
    through this black void which
    is my nothingness
    not being just thinking
    or not thinking just being
    rushing through this time symphony
    where music has no notes and
    spoken words are no different from
    the swirling abyss,black on black
    And suddenly i came back
    surfacing from this nowhere limbo,returning
    to the house where i live which is no longer mine
    waiting for the release of my heaven-bound soul
    trapped by uncompleted tasks,unfinished readings
    and bound to earth by people who
    carry on with their fucking lives as if i am not there
    because in most ways
    I
    AM
    NOT……
    This is the sin of humans existance
    ………….to fuckly exist
    as one guy said once
    to be or not to be
    ..............that is always
    the same fucking question
    JNIJYEN

     
  2. mesk-ellil

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    Re : when we think too much

    do u know that u really have some talent!!
    this is soo good! [gd] keep up the good work!
     
  3. tilila

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    Re : when we think too much

    trés trés fort !!
    des reflexions qui ont du mérite ,une subtilité et une sensibilté à revendre !
    bravo!
     
  4. papillon

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    très forte paroles bravo...
    but now you are not ascending your are "under the moon",you are very "optimist" .you have a good point of vew about a human being and the existance, ceci est rare dans notre époque ou on sous estime ces qualités de coeurs...
     
  5. jniyen

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    zwiin hadchi dyali [25h]
     
  6. maghribia

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    you know yo are touching the heart with your writing .
    i was really mad but when i red that i felt so cooooooooooooool .
    keep going & good luck ;-)
     
  7. jniyen

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    thanks.
     

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