when we think too much

jniyen

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i feel myself ascending
through this black void which
is my nothingness
not being just thinking
or not thinking just being
rushing through this time symphony
where music has no notes and
spoken words are no different from
the swirling abyss,black on black
And suddenly i came back
surfacing from this nowhere limbo,returning
to the house where i live which is no longer mine
waiting for the release of my heaven-bound soul
trapped by uncompleted tasks,unfinished readings
and bound to earth by people who
carry on with their fucking lives as if i am not there
because in most ways
I
AM
NOT……
This is the sin of humans existance
………….to fuckly exist
as one guy said once
to be or not to be
..............that is always
the same fucking question
JNIJYEN
 

tilila

Visiteur
Re : when we think too much

trés trés fort !!
des reflexions qui ont du mérite ,une subtilité et une sensibilté à revendre !
bravo!
 

papillon

Visiteur
Re : when we think too much

très forte paroles bravo...
but now you are not ascending your are "under the moon",you are very "optimist" .you have a good point of vew about a human being and the existance, ceci est rare dans notre époque ou on sous estime ces qualités de coeurs...
 

maghribia

Visiteur
you know yo are touching the heart with your writing .
i was really mad but when i red that i felt so cooooooooooooool .
keep going & good luck ;-)
 
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